Changes between Version 30 and Version 31 of SignMeUpPortal

Timestamp:

02/26/13 12:20:41 (11 years ago)

Author:

Aaron Helsinger

Comment:

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SignMeUpPortal

@@ -33 +33 @@
          If you want to check whether your can use your Institution's account to login:
          <ul>
-           <li> Go to <a href="https://panther.gpolab.bbn.com"> the GENI Portal </a> and press the Use GENI button.
+           <li> Go to <a href="https://panther.gpolab.bbn.com"> the GENI Portal </a> and press the 'Use GENI' button.
            </li>
            <li>
-           Start typing your institution's name and if it is a member it will just show up, select it and press Continue. If it does not, read on to the next session. 
+           Start typing your institution's name and if it is a member it will just show up; select it and press 'Continue'. If it does not appear in the list, read on to the next section. 
            </li>
             <li>
-           This will transfer you to the familiar Login Page of your institution. If you get an error after you login please send us [mailto:portal-help@geni.net an email] with the error you got. 
+           Pressing 'Continue' will transfer you to the familiar Login Page of your institution. Log in to your institution using your usual username and password. If you get an error after you login please send us [mailto:portal-help@geni.net an email] with the error you got. 
            </li>
            <li>
-           If you successfully login, then follow the instructions in the next page, press Activate. <br/> <b> Congratulations, now you have a GENI Account </b>
+           If you successfully login, then follow the instructions in the next page, and press 'Activate'. <br/> <b> Congratulations, now you have a GENI Account. </b>
             
            </li>
@@ -59 +59 @@
 === If your Institution is not a member of InCommon ===
 
-If you were not able to login to the GENI Portal through your Institution, you can request a GENI only account. In order to do that, please send us an email using the template that follows in [mailto:portal-help@geni.net this address]. Fill in your personal information.
+If you were not able to login to the GENI Portal through your Institution, you can request a GENI-only account. In order to do that, please send us an email using the template that follows to [mailto:portal-help@geni.net this address]. Fill in your personal information.
 
-In the email you have to include a hashed password that you can get using the `slappasswd`. `slappasswd` is a command line tool that is available on Macs and probably most Linux distributions. It will generate a string that begins with "{SSHA}". We need that entire string. If you are having problems using this utility please [mailto:portal-help@geni.net email us].
+In the email you have to include a hashed password that you can get using the `slappasswd` command. `slappasswd` is a command line tool that is available on Macs and probably most Linux distributions. It will generate a string that begins with "{SSHA}". We need that entire string. If you are having problems using this utility please [mailto:portal-help@geni.net email us].
 
 Make sure that you send us this email from the email account that you want to be associated with your GENI account. 
 
-Once you receive an email verifying that we have created an account for you, you can follow the [wiki:SignMeUpPortal#CheckifyoucanuseyourInstitutionsaccount above instructions] but as your Institution use GENI Project Office. 
+Once you receive an email verifying that we have created an account for you, you can follow the [wiki:SignMeUpPortal#CheckifyoucanuseyourInstitutionsaccount above instructions] but as your Institution use 'GENI Project Office'. 
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 Hi,
@@ -72 +72 @@
 I was not able to login to the GENI Portal through my institution and I would like to get a GENI account. 
 
-These are my personal information:
+Here is my personal information:
 
   * Username (max 8 chars, we can make this up if you don't have a preference)