Changes between Version 46 and Version 47 of GENIMonitoring/HowTo

Timestamp:

04/08/15 14:03:49 (9 years ago)

Author:

hdempsey@bbn.com

Comment:

minor cleanup

GENIMonitoring/HowTo

@@ -53 +53 @@
 == Traffic Statistics ==
 
-If you are interested in traffic statistics for you slice, there are two ways to get to statistics for your experiment: you can start with the Slice or start with a VLAN.
+If you are interested in traffic statistics for your slice, there are two ways to get to statistics for your experiment: you can start with the name of your slice, or start with a VLAN ID in your slice.
 
 === Starting with Slice ===
 
-Select "Slices" and find your slice. Once your slice is select you can see the "Information" window which looks like this screen capture:
+Select "Slices" and find your slice. Once your slice is selected, you can see the "Information" window, which looks like this screen capture:
 
 [[Image(slice-info.jpg, 60%)]]
@@ -67 +67 @@
  - "Slivers" - Show the list of slice slivers being monitored for the slice.
 
-To get traffic statistics, select the "Slivers" tab and click on the Sliver ID:
+To get traffic statistics, select the "Slivers" tab, and click on the Sliver ID:
 
 [[Image(sliver-tab.jpg,60%)]]
 
-This will result in a list of links associates with the sliver. Select a link to see the associated (interface:VLAN) endpoints.  Here are example endpoints:
+This will result in a list of links associated with the sliver. Select a link to see the associated (interface:VLAN) endpoints.  Here are example endpoints:
 
 [[Image(endpoints.jpg,80%)]]
 
-One of the slice endpoints shown above is the AL2S Router (sd-sn.losa.net.internet.edu), and its eth5/1 interface is configured for VLAN 1565.  Selecting the Endpoint ID will result in statistics being shown:
+One of the slice endpoints shown above is the AL2S Router (sd-sn.losa.net.internet.edu), and its eth5/1 interface is configured for traffic on VLAN 1565.  Selecting the Endpoint ID will result in statistics being shown:
 
 [[Image(report-stats.jpg,80%)]]
 
-Note: You can select the report type to show live data or historical data over specified range.
+Note: You can select the report type to show live data or historical data over the specified date/time range.  Live data will be updated frequently while you are looking at the page.
 
 === Starting with VLAN(s) ===
 
-If you know the VLAN and you want traffic statistics for it, you can simply select ''' ''GENI Hardware->VLANs'' ''' and enter your VLAN in the "Search" box in the main panel. Here is an example to look for statistics on VLAN 1565:
+If you know a VLAN ID that is active in your slice, and you want traffic statistics for it, you can simply select ''' ''GENI Hardware->VLANs'' ''' and enter your VLAN in the "Search" box in the main panel. Here is an example to look for statistics on VLAN 1565:
 
 [[Image(vlan-search.jpg,60%)]]